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Monkeygoth Minauros Joined: October 2008 Posts: 26 Location: Hillbilly hell Gender:	Haiku This is a haiku (type of Japanese poem) that I wrote a while ago but I don't know if it has the 5-7-5 format: The demon inside haunts tonight, I scream burning the village There it is, I hope you like it.
Tue Oct 07, 2008 12:16 pm

spiderlimbs Nessus Joined: November 2002 Posts: 4455 Location: Right behind you! Gender:	Re: Haiku Nope - you have a 5-5-5 going on right there. But worry not, I am taking your thread and turning it into something great. The write your own haiku Thread! Yay! C'mon people...it's gonna be fun. A haiku to my coffee You keep me awake Through the long and boring day I take you with cream Top That! ~spidey _________________ You are entitled to your own opinions, but not your own facts.
Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:08 pm

Monkeygoth Minauros Joined: October 2008 Posts: 26 Location: Hillbilly hell Gender:	Re: Haiku Good idea!! I guess I will go and fix the haiku. After I cut my self. JK
Tue Oct 07, 2008 1:38 pm

LadyAttercop Nessus Joined: November 2004 Posts: 3121 Location: Florida, USA Gender:	Re: Haiku Spidey, I see your coffee haiku, and raise you an ode to zombies: Zombies lust for brains. Shambling, they come for me. I can outrun them. Monkeygoth wrote: Good idea!! I guess I will go and fix the haiku. After I cut my self. JK Your joke is passe. Goths cutting is so cliche. Please watch what you say. (For anyone else who wants to play, but didn't have to write these poems in 8th grade English class, a haiku is a three line poem that has 5 syllables in the first and third lines and 7 in the second.) _________________ Strange Fiction: a webcomic for the cynical, sarcastic, snarky & self-destructive
Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:22 pm

DreamingDead Phlegethos Joined: March 2008 Posts: 68 Gender:	Re: Haiku Never heard of it until now....umm... apparantly ive misplaced my inspiration, so i'll just write whats on my mind. Pencil cracked again. Damn this low quality s***. I shall draw later. _________________ Shadows dance like the wind chimes of a burning house. Mater Memento Mori. www.dreamcancer.com
Sun Oct 12, 2008 3:46 am

the dreadful hours Avernus Joined: November 2008 Posts: 9 Location: dread Gender:	Re: Haiku life is outlandish here in saratoga springs i'm a scalliwag _________________ feverish, devilish, and irrelevant...
Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:14 am

Lash Dis Joined: November 2008 Posts: 15 Gender:	Re: Haiku I can see the stars Airborne diamonds in the sky They fall down sometime
Mon Nov 24, 2008 9:45 pm

Lunamoth Nessus Joined: August 2002 Posts: 7435 Location: Austin, TX Gender:	Re: Haiku Here's one honoring my drive to work this morning... Sun is in my eyes Rubbish Bins in the road Snapped my damn mirror! _________________ "He ne'er is crowned with immortality Who fears to follow where airy voices lead." -John Keats
Tue Nov 25, 2008 7:14 am

ArcAngel Nessus Joined: November 2005 Posts: 3019 Location: Ontario, Canada Gender:	Re: Haiku Lunamoth wrote: Here's one honoring my drive to work this morning... Sun is in my eyes Rubbish Bins in the road Snapped my damn mirror! Your 2nd line only has 6 syllables. Perhaps "Rubbish bins litter the road"? _________________ "I Witnessed The Black Plague And All I Got Was This Lousy T-Shirt!" ☣ DeviantArt ☣
Tue Dec 02, 2008 12:46 am

waningmoth Minauros Joined: November 2008 Posts: 44 Location: dundonald, kilmarnock, scotland Gender:	Re: Haiku morpheus calms torment within tired minds and hearts as the sun fades away. started writing this, forgot about dinner in oven, smoke alarm went off. _________________ "....we whose thirst an ocean could not quench, are we going to consent to satisfy ourselves with a few drops of water because certain madmen with meaningless smiles have pretended that such is wisdom, after all?" auguste villiers (axel)
Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:17 am

spiderlimbs Nessus Joined: November 2002 Posts: 4455 Location: Right behind you! Gender:	Re: Haiku Here's one about my current school loan that has come due: Bloodsucking leeches The federal loan people I need deferrment ~spidey _________________ You are entitled to your own opinions, but not your own facts.
Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:06 am

ArcAngel Nessus Joined: November 2005 Posts: 3019 Location: Ontario, Canada Gender:	Re: Haiku Sleep necessary I find I stay wide awake Wee hours of morning _________________ "I Witnessed The Black Plague And All I Got Was This Lousy T-Shirt!" ☣ DeviantArt ☣
Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:41 am

Lunamoth Nessus Joined: August 2002 Posts: 7435 Location: Austin, TX Gender:	Re: Haiku ArcAngel wrote: Lunamoth wrote: Here's one honoring my drive to work this morning... Sun is in my eyes Rubbish Bins in the road Snapped my damn mirror! Your 2nd line only has 6 syllables. Perhaps "Rubbish bins litter the road"? Damn, it was supposed to say "Rubbish bins ARE in the road," but I was trying to be quick about posting. I like your line better though. _________________ "He ne'er is crowned with immortality Who fears to follow where airy voices lead." -John Keats
Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:40 am

LadyAttercop Nessus Joined: November 2004 Posts: 3121 Location: Florida, USA Gender:	Re: Haiku One inspired by work today: Insurance is dull. My customers are assholes. Is it Friday yet? _________________ Strange Fiction: a webcomic for the cynical, sarcastic, snarky & self-destructive
Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:55 am

ArcAngel Nessus Joined: November 2005 Posts: 3019 Location: Ontario, Canada Gender:	Re: Haiku Responding to yours, LadyA. Hiya LadyA Yes, people are really lame Sorry, no Friday. _________________ "I Witnessed The Black Plague And All I Got Was This Lousy T-Shirt!" ☣ DeviantArt ☣
Thu Dec 04, 2008 10:50 am

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