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Oidhche-Yorath
Malbolge
Joined: December 2008 Posts: 273 Location: A mansion of the imagination Gender:
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 Poem: Midnight Corridor
Midnight takes flight, on your window he alights Bourne on shifting wings of stars To see the infinite within sight The worlds that are ours
Clicking shoes strolling through the endless corridor The halls of mind sealed in haze Moonlight eyes open, beholding the portrait's door The labyrinthine, swirling maze
Ticking pace carries him deep To his left the doors do shriek Sleeplessly in the land of sleep Sills to the right softly speak
He parts the curtains and walks on Face set with whimsy and smile Fleeting like dreams, he is gone Ever walking the dreaming mile
_________________ The urge to punish others has more to do with venting frustration than it does with correcting behavior.
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| Fri Mar 25, 2011 6:00 pm |
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Midieval Fantasy
Manisha
Joined: October 2009 Posts: 8319 Location: Jacksonville Florida. Gender:
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 Re: Poem: Midnight Corridor
I I am having a hard time understanding it, but I think it is very nicely done.
_________________ "May I have the Enlightenment of Buddha, the Peace of Gandhi, the Balance of Loazi, the Confidence of Hypatia, the Logic of Dawkins, and the Science of Sagan to guide me in all things." -Midi
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| Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:11 am |
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Oidhche-Yorath
Malbolge
Joined: December 2008 Posts: 273 Location: A mansion of the imagination Gender:
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 Re: Poem: Midnight Corridor
Thank you for reading 
_________________ The urge to punish others has more to do with venting frustration than it does with correcting behavior.
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| Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:16 pm |
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sjldog
Maladomini
Joined: February 2010 Posts: 595 Location: City of Park Hills, Missouri Gender:
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 Re: Poem: Midnight Corridor
I liked it but i did not get all of it it sounded good tho
_________________ I'd rather be myself and be rejected by an entire nation than to happily be accepted by the masses as a copy of an imitation. Thorin...
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