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SilverBlood
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Joined: May 2009 Posts: 23 Location: Canada Gender:
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 A Poem With No Name
Your eyes are cold as we say good bye
I thought you loved me but it was a lie
You left without a word
I wanting to move backward
I wanted to change what is now done
I wanted to be with you when we had fun
But now all that is gone
You have left...no more sun
Explanation Of Last Line: A boy is always the light in a girls world so he is gone. He is like the sun, the source of light.
_________________ Not all those who wander are lost
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| Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:18 pm |
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IX_DEATH_XI
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Joined: February 2010 Posts: 14 Location: in your pants Gender:
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 Re: A Poem With No Name
cool
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| Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:52 pm |
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sjldog
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Joined: February 2010 Posts: 57 Location: fredricktown Mo Gender:
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 Re: A Poem With No Name
Very nice poem.
_________________ ttp://img98.echo.cx/img98/5184/canas1copy8bn16rw.jpg CRAZY!!!! I was crazy once they put me in a room... A rubber room It made me crazzzy. CRAZY!!!! I was crazy once they put me in a room... A rubber room It made me crazzzy.
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| Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:48 pm |
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Kra(PL)
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Joined: June 2010 Posts: 15 Location: Poland - Częstochowa Gender:
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 Re: A Poem With No Name
In my oppinion, it's a very simple poem, but it's ok. I like it
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| Sat Jun 26, 2010 3:27 pm |
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