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 A Poem With No Name 
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Your eyes are cold as we say good bye

I thought you loved me but it was a lie

You left without a word

I wanting to move backward

I wanted to change what is now done

I wanted to be with you when we had fun

But now all that is gone

You have left...no more sun


Explanation Of Last Line: A boy is always the light in a girls world so he is gone. He is like the sun, the source of light.

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Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:18 pm
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Post Re: A Poem With No Name
cool


Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:52 pm
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Post Re: A Poem With No Name
Very nice poem.

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CRAZY!!!! I was crazy once they put me in a room... A rubber room It made me crazzzy. CRAZY!!!! I was crazy once they put me in a room... A rubber room It made me crazzzy.


Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:48 pm
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Post Re: A Poem With No Name
In my oppinion, it's a very simple poem, but it's ok. I like it


Sat Jun 26, 2010 3:27 pm
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