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My english is not that good but I tend to make it better every day. Here are some of my poems:

Mask
This world is so dark, so greedy and such a selfish place.
Where people wear masks instead of showing their face.
They kept it hidden for too long , so it started to rust,
They don't know who they are, so it turned into dust.

Moral values are so much destroyed, almost lost,
People will fight for what they want by any cost.
It doesn't really matter if they lie or run over others,
To get what they want, they would betray their brothers.

Day by day ignorance is becoming common thing,
I feel afraid what future holds, what it will bring.
It's sad all this is happening in such advanced age.
Hopefully this will be just another turn of the page.

But no, it's not just a phase, it's a never ending doom,
Where people die in name of freedom, but for whom?
For greedy politicians that see nothing but money,
For such evil people who think our wishes are funny.

They enslaved everyone but we still think we are free
They control every aspect of your life, that's the key.
All they want is to make you fit into a mold,
So they can do what they want, to get more gold.

Great minds will always strugle to resist control,
But system will break them and take each soul.
Wake up people or you will end up like cattle,
Try to understand that this is your life battle.

No one will fight for you because only you can,
Will you crawl like a snake or stand like a man?
That choice is yours and always will be,
Strip that binding and tell me what you see.

If you can see chaos, suffering and people in pain,
Then congratulations, you are one of the few sane.
Now when you are free, search who you really are,
And you will find it trough suffer, it's not that far.

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Death
Quick, slow, painful, natural, comes in all forms,
It can pass unnoticed, and sometimes with storms.
Rapists, killers, humans, it will catch us all,
No one has ever escaped it , we all must fall.

When you think about it, it seems so far,
When you look at it, it's like hidden star.
You fear it, because it can happen soon,
There is no cure, no one is immune.

Some people call death bad, sad, unwanted,
Because they feel like they are haunted.
But what death is, what lesson does it carry,
Is it really that awful, is it really that scary.

Life and death are both sides of the coin,
And when the time comes, they will rejoin.
Death's message is simple, have no fear,
Enjoy your life, I think that's very clear.

When you live your life fully and with smile,
You will see that every day was worthwhile.
And when the life music comes to its end,
Tell them not to mourn you, the coin will blend.


Fri Dec 19, 2014 5:12 am
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You've got some potential! Should get a beta-reader for some language hiccups, but I like the feeling you portray :)

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Fri Dec 19, 2014 10:06 am
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Thank you so much. Many told me that I write very good.
I don't want to share random poems when you can read it all here:
http://allpoetry.com/poems/by/Alexandrulus%20M
That's my profile , and there you can find some of my english poems. I write waaaay better in my own language.


Fri Dec 19, 2014 10:44 am
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Alatoru wrote:
Thank you so much. Many told me that I write very good.
I don't want to share random poems when you can read it all here:
http://allpoetry.com/poems/by/Alexandrulus%20M
That's my profile , and there you can find some of my english poems. I write waaaay better in my own language.


Oh, how lovely! I'll give them a read when I have time.

I've only just rediscovered poetry as a means of expression after not really trying for a couple of years. It was a combination of my abusive relationship and taking a drama class that really sparked my interest again. Unfortunately I find it frustrating to try and share my poetry in written form only, since a lot of the meaning for me carries in the way I read it, but then it is so interesting to see how others interpret my words and which of the words that carry the poem for the reader. Often the meaning and experience of the poem changes completely for someone who has read my poetry and then hears me read it and explain the context of it. That in itself excites me and makes me fall in love with art all over again!

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Fri Dec 19, 2014 12:03 pm
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It is indeed , the true art when you are able to form something , with just words. You are not here, with person to tell them, you just write down the words, you lead him trough it, and bring him same feelings you have. So powerful.


Fri Dec 19, 2014 1:09 pm
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